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Jun 28, 2005 8:44:41 GMT -5
Post by The°Torn°§oul on Jun 28, 2005 8:44:41 GMT -5
im gonna try a poem,ive had this for a long time and forgot about it
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Jun 28, 2005 9:11:58 GMT -5
Post by The°Torn°§oul on Jun 28, 2005 9:11:58 GMT -5
I call this The Wall:
I shall put my feelings in bricks, build myself a wall,Build this wall around me, I feel quite small, i wll build this wall up to the sky, you'll never no just how high, you kept me bottled up inside,You'll never know just quite how the way my heartaches the sorrow that makes me tremble inside, the walls seem to shake, you've come along and found my wall,these bricks will never break,for these bricks are far to thick,my heart never again will u take i go asleep inside my wall,my stone fortress shape, and i enter a sleep-like state, dont let my dream become a nightmare, it assumes to be a link to hell,and if i stay alittle longer, ill become an empty shell, i stand upon the tallest cliff,demons all around me, i glance into the river of flame,and take my life long fall,and when i wake,i open my eyes and there stands the wall,memories flood back inside, id used to think you'd be my bride,then my heart it seemed to ache inside,my soul began to cry, i long to scream,i yurn to yell,but as you know i have fell,in a love i cannot leave,i look on it with a heavy heave,my throat grows thin,it is so hard to breath,then those echoing voices haunt my mind once more,what used to be a peaceful whisper,has become an ear-splitting roar,you used to be my haven,my comforting shore,into pieces my heart has been torn, my mind now lays in a heep,your knife of sorrow has cut deep into my soul,my heart has become as black as coal,its never warm but an icy cold,I sit and observe as the seasons come and go,my favorite is autumn watching as the sun round me rolled in its autumn tint of gold,I lie in bed,inside my wall,alone and growing old,"she's left you now" i once told myself,I think about you,my everything,but as you said i cannot cling to our past, "she was right"i have always said,yet the thought of you still trembles inside me,as the burning of your image embers inside my mind, as i lay there,the walls seem to shake,as a brick fell out of place,my end is near, will noone come to my rescue,i will die here missing you,my life is in hell,as another brick of memories of you fell,my wall is coming down,The sorrow of my life renown
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Jun 28, 2005 9:12:32 GMT -5
Post by The°Torn°§oul on Jun 28, 2005 9:12:32 GMT -5
tell me what u think
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Jun 28, 2005 10:02:48 GMT -5
Post by The°Torn°§oul on Jun 28, 2005 10:02:48 GMT -5
2 years have passed since i wrote it and i forgot it
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Jun 28, 2005 12:12:41 GMT -5
Post by darkangel13 on Jun 28, 2005 12:12:41 GMT -5
ok...that was.....something.......nice poem sweety. as charity said, u have a great talent! keep on writing!
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Jul 2, 2005 4:35:17 GMT -5
Post by Elegey on Jul 2, 2005 4:35:17 GMT -5
lol he had my help muwahahaha i taint you all slowly!!!!!
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Jul 2, 2005 9:11:07 GMT -5
Post by darkangel13 on Jul 2, 2005 9:11:07 GMT -5
and i shall taunt u......haha
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Jul 2, 2005 10:49:19 GMT -5
Post by Xombie on Jul 2, 2005 10:49:19 GMT -5
you tainted me???
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Jul 2, 2005 15:53:22 GMT -5
Post by Elegey on Jul 2, 2005 15:53:22 GMT -5
YES WITH MY EVIL NESS OF DOOM,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,doom,de end...O.O Oh wusat!?
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Jul 2, 2005 19:21:50 GMT -5
Post by darkangel13 on Jul 2, 2005 19:21:50 GMT -5
michael....ur just...odd.
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Jul 3, 2005 7:04:13 GMT -5
Post by Xombie on Jul 3, 2005 7:04:13 GMT -5
Yeah he is obssessed with gir.
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Jul 3, 2005 22:39:15 GMT -5
Post by The°Torn°§oul on Jul 3, 2005 22:39:15 GMT -5
i feel like i am being tossed like a piece of trash,i feel like i cant be trusted i am so depressed i donmt know how i can live anymore.
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Jul 4, 2005 0:03:34 GMT -5
Post by Xombie on Jul 4, 2005 0:03:34 GMT -5
Why?
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Jul 4, 2005 10:40:41 GMT -5
Post by The°Torn°§oul on Jul 4, 2005 10:40:41 GMT -5
i dont know
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Jul 5, 2005 9:42:14 GMT -5
Post by darkangel13 on Jul 5, 2005 9:42:14 GMT -5
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