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Post by SageStranger on Jun 8, 2005 6:37:55 GMT -5
Take me back Home again Put me in my Baby Pen
Leave me there to die again
Just like you did before.
You take the pain and the strife
to find some meaning in this life
You find a woman and call her wife
and life means so much more.
You've put me on that totem pole
Worshiped me as you've grown old
You've lost your heart and sold your soul
For one small bowl of soup.
Things aren't the same as they once were
My whole life seems to be a blur
What once brought me joy now seems to hurt
and now I must move on.
So take me back home again
Put me in that baby pen
Leave me there to die again
and I'll start fresh tomorrow.
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Post by darkangel13 on Jun 8, 2005 9:35:20 GMT -5
nice, sage. i like that 1. did u make that 1 up or find it? good job ever which way.
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Post by Xombie on Jun 8, 2005 10:58:15 GMT -5
I liked that dad. I want to ask the same question Dark angel asked.
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Post by Elegey on Jun 8, 2005 15:59:04 GMT -5
he wrote it im sure
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Post by Xombie on Jun 8, 2005 16:37:07 GMT -5
Yeah I just asked him. Im at his house. He said he wrote it himself and it was when he was in collage.
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Post by SageStranger on Jun 8, 2005 21:43:04 GMT -5
Its mine, thank you all very much for the compliments..
Blessings 2 U!
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Post by The°Torn°§oul on Jun 12, 2005 4:40:26 GMT -5
let me send my compliments to sage...here goes ... NICE ,that is a nice poem
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Post by darkangel13 on Jun 12, 2005 14:23:37 GMT -5
u wrote that in collage? kool! do u have any other poems?
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Post by SageStranger on Jun 12, 2005 20:45:37 GMT -5
Not really any that are that good, that was my all time best one I think hehe.
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Post by darkangel13 on Jun 14, 2005 13:51:04 GMT -5
u think?! lol. sorry i dont have a brain! good poem anyways!
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