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Post by midnightrose on Jun 16, 2005 8:27:31 GMT -5
ok ,its called Indefinite Silence ,i have no one to deicate it to though .....anyways ..haha
~Indefinite Silence~ Strange noises are creeping so bold and ice cold a voice that makes ur skin tremble and pierces ur very soul
This voice is so loud but you can barely hear it you're destined to find it yet you search but you can't get near it
You've been hearing these voices but you're all alone it whispers and whines it sings and groans
The voice suddenly grows louder run, but you'll never escape now you try to make a change but it's a little too late
You've lived your life now your time is over and done death has found its next victim and you happen to be one~
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Post by The°Torn°§oul on Jun 16, 2005 8:33:04 GMT -5
good
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Post by darkangel13 on Jun 16, 2005 8:34:52 GMT -5
kool poem! i like that 1. neat.
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Post by midnightrose on Jun 17, 2005 8:52:22 GMT -5
thanks
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Post by darkangel13 on Jun 21, 2005 9:59:34 GMT -5
yw
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Post by darkangel13 on Jun 21, 2005 11:26:09 GMT -5
yes..please do!
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Post by Elegey on Jun 23, 2005 13:22:58 GMT -5
*claps*very good Midnight,keep it up you have great potential*bows and goes back to writing*
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Post by darkangel13 on Jun 30, 2005 9:24:01 GMT -5
michael, u need 2 put more poems on here 2.
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